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The soft crunch of gravel under your feet
Stepping to the rhythm, stepping to the beat
Others surround you, excitement rides on the breeze
Summer putting souls to rest, their stress turned into peace

Driving, climbing, walking through
Nothing else better to do
In this old town, then what we found
On the night when our stars fall down.

Everything thing in this clearing become silent
Whispers of anticipation suddenly compliant
And we all hold our breath; our hearts in our chests, roughly kicking
as the final minutes on the clock fall away, softly ticking.

We look to the skies
and I can never believe my eyes
as I sat on the concrete that night
When the Stars seemed to Collide

Colors surge
In brilliant bursts
And these new lights we made,
These beautiful embers flicker at first
But more are launched, a crusade

Just a flicker, a flash
and when these lights touch the night
the atmosphere holds steadfast
And these stars begin to ignite

Bang, Crash, Boom
They create a chorus of sound
They play a thundering tune
And I am immediately spell bound

The summer heat coddles me close
And as I sit and revel, I think to make a toast
To those who sit under the sky tonight
I hope they enjoyed watching
The Stars that Seem to Collide.
Just a little thing about summer, and (if you don't already know) what do you think I'm talking about in this poem? One hint: It happens every summer, but it's not universal. ;) Its pretty easy.
Anyways I hope you all enjoy my poem and fill free to leave your guesses and feedback in the space below! Have an awesome day, night, or any time inbetween!
Copyright of -JP, ~00SIMPLESOUL00 :icon00simplesoul00:
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lavenderl Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Fireworks!
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00SIMPLESOUL00 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Correct!!
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lavenderl Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^.^ I really enjoyed your piece.
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00SIMPLESOUL00 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Aww thank you, it is much appreciated!
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lavenderl Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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untitled1000 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i'm thinking of fireworks.... hehe ^^; somehow reminds me of Fourth of July or the summer festivals in Japan where they dress in yukata and watch fireworks. i love the images you created, very vivid and colorful ^_______^
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00SIMPLESOUL00 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student General Artist
You are indeed correct! :meow: That sounds awesome, and thanks for much for reading and the feedback!!
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untitled1000 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yay~! haha you're most welcome! :hug:
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AwesomeDuskAngel Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist
Um...IDK...a meteor shower? XD
BTW that was AMAZING!!! :D
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00SIMPLESOUL00 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student General Artist
It would have been a cool concept if it was a meteor shower, and good guess, but its actually fireworks! :meow:
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